Added a password section to the opsec framework#468
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Review: PR #468 — Password section for opsec framework
Content is well-structured and covers the topic thoroughly. Found a few issues that should be addressed before merge.
Issues (should fix)
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Typo in vocs.config.tsx:
collpased→collapsed— The sidebar config property is misspelled. Other entries in the same file usecollapsed: false. This may silently fail (property ignored) rather than cause a build error. -
Typo in sso.mdx:
best pratice→best practice— Line in the "Advantages of Centralized Sign-in" section. -
Typo in rootaccounts.mdx:
the closed immediately→then closed immediately— Under "Keep root accounts cold", the sentence reads "sessions are opened when a key administrative function must be performed, the closed immediately via an explicit logout". Should be "then closed". -
Broken internal link in opsec/overview.mdx — Line 47 links to
/opsec/passwords/overview, which this PR deletes. Should be updated to/opsec/passwords/basics.
Minor (nice to fix)
- Missing trailing newlines in
managers.mdx,rootaccounts.mdx, andsso.mdx. Standard convention for text files.
Security Review
- No hardcoded secrets, tokens, or API keys
- No injection vectors (XSS, path traversal) — content is MDX documentation
- No unsafe deserialization or eval
- No suspicious dependencies
- Content accurately describes security best practices (password managers, SSO, cold root accounts, rotation policies)
QA Review
- Frontmatter format is valid and consistent with other pages in the repo
- Internal links to
/opsec/mfa/overview,/opsec/passwords/sso,/opsec/passwords/rootaccountsare valid - Contributor attribution is correct (shallem as author)
- The deleted
overview.mdxplaceholder is properly replaced with substantive content - Spelling: 3 typos noted above; should check against cspell.json wordlist after fixes
Verdict: Request changes for the typos and broken link. All are quick fixes.
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Hi shallem! Thanks again for this addition and for reviewing our volunteerś feedback. A few suggestions below! • Frontmatter descriptions (add/expand to 140-160 chars), for example:
• Don't mind index.md, it's generated automatically upon deployment. |
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@mattaereal - I have just pushed another round of changes to address your comments above. |
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@frameworks-volunteer, can you do a recheck to see if we missed anything during our interaction with @shallem? And if the vocs config, structure, and format are correct? |
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Model: Re-reviewed PR #468 after @shallem's updates. Found several items that were missed or introduced since the prior review. Issues (should fix before merge)
Minor (nice to fix)
Security Review (re-checked)
Summary of prior review statusThe prior review (CHANGES_REQUESTED) flagged 4 issues + 1 minor. Status:
Verdict: Still requesting changes for the broken link (#1 above) and the short descriptions (#2). The gendered language (#3) should also be addressed. |
| 3. [Browser Security](/opsec/browser/overview): Browsing Safely | ||
| 4. [Multi-Factor Authentication](/opsec/mfa/overview): Hardening Authentication | ||
| 5. [Password Management](/opsec/passwords/overview): Password Robustness | ||
| 5. [Password Management](/opsec/passwords/basics): Password Robustness |
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| 5. [Password Management](/opsec/passwords/basics): Password Robustness | |
| 5. [Password Management](/opsec/passwords/overview): Password Robustness |
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| In addition, a centralized identity provider allows for a consolidated view | ||
| of all of the devices where a user is signed in; a single place to rotate | ||
| passwords if you are concerned that a user may have revealed his password to a |
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| passwords if you are concerned that a user may have revealed his password to a | |
| passwords if you are concerned that a user may have revealed their password to a |
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| title: "Enterprise Password Managers | Security Alliance" | |||
| description: "Configure password managers (Bitwarden, etc.) for secure storage, autofill, sharing. Includes self-hosting, TOTP, emergency recovery." | |||
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| description: "Configure password managers (Bitwarden, etc.) for secure storage, autofill, sharing. Includes self-hosting, TOTP, emergency recovery." | |
| description: "Configure password managers (Bitwarden, etc.) for secure storage, autofill, and sharing. Includes self-hosting, TOTP, zero-trust, emergency recovery." |
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| title: "Root Account Passwords | Security Alliance" | |||
| description: "Secure root/admin accounts: password rotation and storage, least privilege, monitoring. Prevents escalation in Linux/AWS/cloud." | |||
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| description: "Secure root/admin accounts: password rotation and storage, least privilege, monitoring. Prevents escalation in Linux/AWS/cloud." | |
| description: "Secure root/admin accounts: password rotation and storage, cold accounts, password manager sharing, monitoring. Prevents escalation in Linux/AWS/cloud." |
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| title: "Single Sign-on | Security Alliance" | |||
| description: "Use SSO (OAuth/SAML) for passwordless auth with Okta/Auth0/Google. Reduces secrets sprawl, enforces MFA and session controls." | |||
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| description: "Use SSO (OAuth/SAML) for passwordless auth with Okta/Auth0/Google. Reduces secrets sprawl, enforces MFA and session controls." | |
| description: "Use SSO (OAuth/SAML) for federated passwordless auth with Okta/Auth0/Google. Reduces secrets sprawl, enforces MFA, session controls, IdP hardening." |
Added a new section about passwords with the following sub-pages:
@mattaereal - feedback on all aspects of the PR are greatly appreciated.