Update upgrade instructions from 22H2 to Azure Stack HCI version 24H2#4172
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Clarified prerequisites and registration, converted the bullet points into a more readable table, especially because the resource registration could be overlooked. added note about download does not appear when registration is not made, in order to reduce support calls.
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| azure-local/upgrade/upgrade-22h2-to-23h2-powershell.md | Details | ||
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Can you review the proposed changes? If you approve the new content in this PR, the commits must be moved to the private repository for automated checks and publishing. After you move the commits, close this PR ( #label:"aq-pr-triaged" @MicrosoftDocs/public-repo-pr-review-team |
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| The first step in deploying Azure Local is to download the OS from the Azure portal. The software download includes a free 60-day trial. However, if you've purchased Integrated System or Premier solution hardware from the [Azure Local Catalog](https://aka.ms/AzureStackHCICatalog) through your preferred Microsoft hardware partner (OEM), the Azure Stack HCI OS should be preinstalled. |
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This is incorrect, and the right statement is that OEMs have golden images available for the deployment.
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I believe this was part of the original instructions but due to the copy paste the whole file is marked as new
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@troettinger thanks for another review if this the changes honour your correction.
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See the comment otherwise looks good
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Hi @Karl-WE: Could you please update the PR to incorporate Thomas’s feedback? Once that’s done, I’ll pull this PR into the private repo to get it merged. I’ll keep this PR open until then. Thanks! |
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added remark about OEM images and golden image download section.
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consolidated messages.
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| The first step in deploying Azure Local is to download the OS from the Azure portal. The software download includes a free 60-day trial. However, if you've purchased Integrated System or Premier solution hardware from the [Azure Local Catalog](https://aka.ms/AzureStackHCICatalog) through your preferred Microsoft hardware partner (OEM), the Azure Stack HCI OS should be preinstalled. |
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I believe this was part of the original instructions but due to the copy paste the whole file is marked as new
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| The first step in deploying Azure Local is to download the OS from the Azure portal. The software download includes a free 60-day trial. However, if you've purchased Integrated System or Premier solution hardware from the [Azure Local Catalog](https://aka.ms/AzureStackHCICatalog) through your preferred Microsoft hardware partner (OEM), the Azure Stack HCI OS should be preinstalled. |
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@troettinger thanks for another review if this the changes honour your correction.
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| azure-local/concepts/plan-network-controller-deployment.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/deploy/deployment-install-os.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/deploy/deployment-introduction.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/deploy/deployment-local-identity-with-key-vault.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/deploy/deployment-prep-active-directory.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/deploy/deployment-virtual.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/manage/upgrade-sdn.md | Details | ||
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| azure-local/plan/configure-custom-settings-active-directory.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/TOC.yml | Details | ||
| azure-local/upgrade/upgrade-22h2-to-23h2-powershell.md | Details | ||
| azure-local/whats-new.md | Details | ||
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Absolute link 'https://learn.microsoft.com//entra/fundamentals/create-new-tenant' will be broken in isolated environments. Replace with a relative link.
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oopsie. @ManikaDhiman I am sorry I fail to understand the GitHub Automation issues after my PR change. Thanks for guidance. |
improving readability of Important remark
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| azure-local/upgrade/upgrade-22h2-to-23h2-powershell.md | Details | ||
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No worries, @Karl-WE. I’ll pull your changes into a private repo PR and keep the file name as-is to avoid any build issues. I'll keep this PR open until then. FYI, we’re planning to update file names as part of a separate bulk update project. Thanks! |
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OK I defer to Thomas' feedback as mentioned the PR Review |
Clarified prerequisites and registration, converted the bullet points into a more readable table, especially because the resource registration could be overlooked.
added note about download does not appear when registration is not made, in order to reduce Microsoft support calls.